Part 10 - A long day for Chris
Rachel walked into the office like any
other day right on 09:00. She spent a few minutes talking with Laura
at the front desk then headed for the elevators. Chris ran though the
main door and strait for the elevators as well.
Rachel turned and said “Hi Chris how
are you today”
Just then the elevator doors opened and
the pair walked in.
“Actually I am a bit late today my
car broke down. So I was coming to see you to discuss punishment. If
you are not too busy”
“I'm not too busy its ok Chris. Sorry
to hear about your car but the rules say you must take 40 full force
kicks to your testicles”
“I know Rachel. I have a very busy
day so I was hoping to ask you if I could be punished now please?”
“That's ok we can do it right now if
you like”
Rachel pressed the basement button and
the elevator started to move down.
“Thanks Rachel. That's very kind of
you. Do you mind if I make a phone call?”
“That's ok just follow me to the
punishment room”
Chris picked out his cell phone and
called Nikki.
“Hi Nikki its Chris, sorry again for
being late to the meeting”
Nikki responded “I already told you
it is ok. It was just a catch up but company policy requires that you
are punished”
“It's ok Nikki I have seen Rachel and
she has agreed to do it now. Any way I should be about 30 minutes
then I'll be with you and we can get everything sorted out”
“Ok Chris I hope your testicles
aren't hurt too bad”
“That's nice of you to say but I will
ask for Rachel to cause as much damage as possible. Se you soon, bye
Nikki”
Chris hung up then jogged down the
corridor to the punishment room. When he entered he looked around.
“Wow that extension really adds a lot
more space. I have been meaning to come down here but at least being
late has given me the chance. Its a shame work has been so demanding
because I would have loved to go out with you some time and catch up.
Its been ages since we did that”
“It has been a while Chris and I miss
you. We should do lunch some time if you have the chance”
“Defiantly I would like that”
Rachel spoke to him with a more serious
tone “If you are ready then can you get undressed I would like to
begin the punishment”
“Of course Rachel”
He took off all his clothes and folded
them up. He placed then on the table then went and stood against the
wall ready to be restrained. Rachel had seen him naked before but
could not resist taking in an eye full of his cock and balls.
She tied his feet to the rings in the
floor then tied a belt around his waste. Rachel then tied a rope
around his wrists and used a pulley the pull his body tight. She
admired his standing with his arms above his head and legs spread
wide.
“Are you ready Chris? I have been
working out recently so my kicks should be a lot harder than last
time. That means you should take more damage”
“That's ok Rachel I know you have to
cause the maximum amount of damage to me. In fact I would like to
request you try to trap my testicles against my body so as to cause
more damage.
“I would be happy to add a few of
those Chris”
“Thank you I am ready to face the
punishment. ”
Rachel responded “You know its a
shame I only get to kick you 40 times. I would love to be able to
really take your balls apart and beat them without mercy. You have a
great pair of testicles and I would love to inflict significant
damage. Hopefully soon I will chance“
“I am sure you will get the chance.
You have a habit of getting what you want sooner or later”
“Lets get started” Rachel said with
a slight smile.
Chris took a deep breath as he prepared
to feel pain. He looked down at her shoes acknowledging how damaging
they will be. He closed his eyes and all he could hear was the hollow
knocking sound of her foot steps as she crossed the room in her
heels. That sound he had heard before and never failed to frighten
him.
Rachel stood in front of him to begin
the assault on his testicles. He opened his eyes and she slowly
raised her feet so the front of her shoe touched his testicles. She
smiled as she moved his dangling balls up and down with her foot. She
was playing with him, building suspense and it was working.
She loved the sight of a man tied up
this way. Completely immobile and with his most sensitive part
presented to her. She moved her leg back ready to strike then at that
moment there was a knock on the door and a voice saying.
“Hi it's me Nikki please let me in I
have to speak with Chris”
Rachel replied “I was about to begin
his punishment he is naked and tied up. Can it wait”
Rachel was clearly not impressed with
the intrusion.
“I am sorry but it is quite important
can I speak with him please”
Rachel turned to Chris “Shall I let
her in? Is it ok if she sees you like this?”
“Its ok let her in if she says it is
important and afterwards please extend my punishment as much as you
think is fair”
Rachel opened the door and let the
young woman in. She was 21 years old with blonde hair. Slightly
shorter than Rachel, with a slender frame, small breasts and a very
cute overall appearance. She was wearing a short grey skirt with a
matching grey jacket and a white skin tight shirt underneath. Looking
down revealed she was wearing 4 inch white heels with white socks.
She entered the room then gasped as she
saw Chris tied to the wall with his legs spread. She ran her eyes up
and down him a few times before saying.
“What's happening to him?”
Rachel still a little annoyed by he
girl said “Chris was late to work so he was about to receive 40
full force kicks to his testicles as punishment”
Nikki responded “Ok it was just a bit
of a shock seeing him like that. I have never seen a man being
punished in this way before. I knew he had to receive 40 kicks to his
testicles but seeing him tied up and his legs spread makes it more
real you know. What will 40 kicks do to his testicles?”
Rachel responded “The kicks will
obviously be very painful but that amount will cause a bit of damage.
They will bruise and swell up a bit. His scrotum will be a deep red
and there will probably be visible bruises on top of that. He will be
a bit sore for a few days but should heal pretty quick”
The young girl looked very interested
by what Rachel said then replied “That's good to know, thank you
Rachel”
“That's ok Nikki. You better get the
info you need from Chris”
Rachel appeared to be a bit more
accepting of the young woman and gestured for her to go over to
Chris.
Nikki walked over and said “I am so
sorry to interrupt but Julie at Pharama Care did not get the password
to the zip files you sent here can you remember it?”
“Yeah I know it its Pharama123”
said Chris.
Nikki pulled out her phone and used it
to send text message Julie. She then stared at the phone waiting for
a response. Chris also eagerly awaited to see if the password worked.
Then her phone beeped and Nikki said “Yep that's right, she has got
in now. Thanks Chris. One thing, would you mind if I watched your
punishment? I would love to see your testicles taking a beating”
Rachel shrugged her shoulders and said
“I don't mind is that ok with you Chris?”
Chris responded “It's ok you can stay
if you like just please don't discuss it with the others. This will
be very painful for me and I will struggle to cope”
Rachel looked at them both and replied
“So its agreed then. Right lets get to it shall we? Given the delay
I will have to extend your punishment but we can discuss that after
you have taken the 40 kicks”
Chris nodded as he knew his punishment
would be extended but Nikki looked very surprised. She said “Because
I came down here he is being punished extra? That sounds a bit harsh”
Rachel explained “Those are the
rules. If there are any interruptions the victim must be punished
extra. Even though it was you who came down here he must pay the
price”
Nikki nodded her head accepting the
explanation. She then walked over and leaned against the wall so she
could watch the punishment take place. Rachel got into position and
pulled back her leg. Chris braced for pain as she swung her foot
towards his testicles as hard as she could.
KICK!
He tensed his lower body as the foot
struck his balls.
KICK!
He groaned though his teeth at the
pain.
KICK!
Again Rachel struck him as hard as she
could. She saw his testicles bounce up from the impact and could she
him tense up. As the balls fell back into there normal position she
propelled her foot forward.
KICK!
She could feel his body absorbing the
impact. She felt her foot slow as it struck the testicles then force
them up into his body. The testicles were both caught briefly between
her foot and his body. There she could feel them being compressed
before shooting out to the sided. This is the point the testicles
took the most damage and pain. Then the remainder of the force went
into the tube at the base of the penis. She swung again
KICK!
She really flung her foot forward as
hard as she could striking his balls perfectly. Again compressing
them against the body momentarily. This is why she only used shoes
that are hard and have no give in them at all. If the shoes have no
give then they transfer more force to the testicles.
KICK!
She saw him throw his head back while
he had his jaw closed tightly. She loved being able to cause so much
pain to a man and felt great pride when her victims suffered.
KICK!
He let out a scream and she curled up
the sides of her mouth with an evil smile.
Still leaned against the wall Nikki
stood with her right hand over her mouth shocked but unable to turn
away. She could not believe how brutally Rachel was kicking his balls
and surprised they could take such a beating. Yet she watched on
fascinated.
KICK!
He screamed louder as the assault
continued. Rachel wanted to keep a good rhythm striking his balls
every 6-8 seconds. This meant he would be in a constant state of high
pain. She also really wanted to cause as much damage to his testicles
as she could. She knew she did not have many kicks to work with but
so wanted to hurt him as much much as possible.
His balls fell back to the bottom of
his sack.
KICK!
This time she landed her foot to the
right a bit so it trapped his left testicle against his body. She
felt it compress and squeeze as it absorbed all the force before
slipping to the side. This caused him to clench his fists as he
screamed in pain.
KICK!
She repeated the procedure and again
trapping his left ball. She loved the feeling of it compressing and
liked the idea of what damage that was causing deep inside the chosen
testicle.
She did this another 4 times then
switched to the other testicle. She then gave it 6 kicks as well and
by that point Chris was in agony. He was thrashing against his
restraints and flinging his legs in no particular direction.
KICK!
Normal, strait down the middle but with
the balls a little swollen they were more easily trapped against the
body. Nikki was still watching and now her hand was covering her
smile. She liked what she was seeing.
The kicks continued until all 40 were
given. After the last kick Rachel stepped back and the pair watch as
he still struggled with the pain. His ball sac was red and his
testicles were noticeably swollen. Nikki walked closer and stood next
to Rachel and said “Wow you kicked him so hard I could not believe
it. You really are good at this. Thank you for letting me watch.
Could I get a closer look at his testicles?”
Rachel looked at her “sure you can
and give them a squeeze if you like”
“really? thank you” Replied Nikki
before walking over to him.
She knelt down and placed her right
hand around his balls. She the applied pressure so she could feel his
testicles flattening.
Chris looked down with his mouth open
as her grip slowly tightened. She then placed her left hand on the
outside of her right hand so she could crush them even harder. She
looked up at him and smiled as she increased the pressure on his
damaged balls. Doing this caused him to throw his head back and let
out a constant cry of pain. Once he had emptied his lungs he took a
few panicked breaths then gritted his teeth.
Rachel watched as Nikki maintained her
tight grip on the testicles. Nikki then rotated his balls around so
she could she how she was miss shaping them. She studied his tortured
testicles carefully but did not lessen her grip at all.
After about three minutes of intense
crushing she released her grip and allowed his balls to fall into
their natural position. Chris looked relieved by this but was still
in pain.
Nikki turned to Rachel with a grin on
her face “That was fun. Can I do other things to his balls”
Rachel thought about it for a second
and responded “Sure what would you like to do to his balls?”
Nikki instantly said “Knee them. I
want to knee him hard”
Rachel sat down on a chair facing the
pair and said “Sure. Knee him as hard as you can”
Nikki clapped her hands together in a
cute display of joy and excitement as she stood up. She stood
directly in front of him and bit her bottom lip as she stared into
his eyes. Chris knew he should just take the pain because objecting
would be a punishable offence.
She then looked down and gauged the
distance to his testicles. Nikki raised her knee so it was touching
the underside of his balls. He brassed for pain as she pulled her
knee back then swung it forward as hard as she could.
WHACK!
Nikki's knee struck his balls with as
she could. He instantly let out a long cry “OWWWWWWW!”
Rachel was impressed with the brutality
of the strike. Nikki turned around to look at Rachel who said “Good,
very good now please continue”
Nikki repositioned herself and sent her
knee crashing into his testicles again.
WHACK!
“OWWWWWWWWW!”
Nikki struck him so hard she nearly
lost her balance but wanted to hurt him as much as she could. Nikki
really wanted to add noticeable damage to his balls to show Rachel
she could ballbust as well. She felt powerful being able to inflict
so much pain on him. She liked the control and loved to see a mans
body tied up like Chris was.
WHACK!
Another hard knee. Nikki felt his
testicles being trapped between her knee and his body. The thought of
what damage this was causing made her a little aroused.
WHACK!
Again she felt his balls being trapped
and tried to continue applying force though out the whole swing of
her knee. She so desperately wanted to add swelling to his manhood.
She saw a tear run down the side a his face and that made her wet.
WHACK!
“ARRRRRRRR”
His leg muscles twitched as he felt the
pain take over. Nikki then had an idea.
WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK!
WHACK!
She kneed him in quick succession as he
tossed his head side to side in pain. She really hurt him and that
thought pleased her.
She turned to Rachel who had watched
the whole thing “Can I kick his balls? Please”
Rachel looked at Chris “What do you
think Chris shall we let her kick your balls for a while?”
He gulped knowing he had to give the
correct answer “Of course........ she can”
Rachel continued “Your testicles have
taken a beating and are pretty swollen but I still think Nikki should
kick your testicles at full force. She should try to cause as much
damage as possible don’t you agree?”
“I agree Rachel. As hard as she can.
May I please request she keep her shoes on. They look hard and if you
allow enough kicks she should be able to add to the swelling”
“That is a fair request Chris. Nikki
when you are ready kick him as hard as you can”
Nikki then stood back and judged the
distance between herself and Chris to kick him perfectly. Without
warning she pulled her right leg back then flung it forward. She used
the full force of her body to kick him with all her strength.
KICK!
Her foot struck his testicles sending
them up into his body and causing him so much pain. She watched as he
tensed all his body and gritted his teeth.
KICK!
“ARRRRRR!. O' god that was hard” He
cried as she landed her second kick.
KICK!
Nikki could see bruising forming on his
sac from what she had done to him. His testicles also looked bigger,
she was pleased with the swelling.
KICK!
Tears ran down his face and he looked
defeated as he recoiled from the pain of the latest kick.
“Try kicking him 5 times as fast as
you can Nikki” said Rachel who was enjoying watching the young
woman hurt him.
KICK! KICK! KICK! KICK! KICK!
He screamed as the kicks struck him one
after the other. His body went limp after the last one had struck and
he let his head fall forward. Even though he was still both girls
knew he was in serious pain.
Nikki though this was a good time to
stop. She had really hurt him and enjoyed every moment. She stepped
back as Rachel stood up.
Rachel then said “Right Chris That
was 40 kicks for being late then what Nikki did to you was punishment
for the interruption. I felt you deserved a lot of pain for the
interruption because it was your fault for not sending the password
to the customer. I hope you agree that this was fair”
He raised his head up and looked at
Rachel. “I do think this was fair. Thank you both for being so hard
on me. I deserved this and I am very grateful for how hard I was
kicked by both of you. I hope you are pleased with the damage you
have caused my testicles”
Both girls nodded to say they were
pleased.
Chris then said “As a way to say
thank you I would love to take you both out to lunch. I want to show
how I support being punished this way and show how grateful I am. You
put a lot of effort into damaging my testicles so you should be
rewarded for it”
The two girls looked at each other and
Rachel said “That sounds like a great idea. It is a very kind offer
Chris”
Rachel then stepped forward and untied
him. He fell to the ground and grabbed his swollen balls as soon as
the restrains were removed. Rachel picked up an ice back from the
freezer unit and handed it to him.
“There you go. It is for your
testicles”
“Thank you” He responded.
Chris then used the ice pack to tend to
his damaged manhood. Given the pain he was feeling he was not
surprised when he final saw how swollen they were. Nikki knelt down
and put her arm on his shoulder.
She said “Are you ok Chris? I hope I
have not caused too much damage to your balls”
He said “I am ok. It will just take
me a minute before I can stand. You don't need to worry about the
damaged. You did the right thing and you did it very well. I am
pleased you kicked me so hard”
She then held him soothingly as the ice
numbed the pain slightly.
Rachel checked her watch and said. “Hey
guys I have to go and meet some one shall we say 12:30 for lunch?”
“Yeah that sounds great” said Chris
Rachel the said “You guys can stay
here as long as you need. I have to go but will meet you at reception
at 12:30”
Chris said “See you in a few hours
and thank you again for the kicks”
Nikki waved and with that Rachel left
the room.
Chris was still feeling a lot of pain
and Nikki saw this. She said “Why don't you lay on your back and I
will apply the ice pack for you”
Chris agreed and steadily laid back on
the floor of the punishment room. He spread his leg and Nikki saw
there was a cushion so she picked it up. She then put it under his
head which he appreciated. Nikki then softly placed the ice pack on
his balls and Chris took deep, steady breaths as she did.
While she did this his penis slowly
became erect and was completely hard soon after. Nikki saw this and a
grim filled her face. She had felt so horny ballbusting him and now
was a chance at release.
She gripped his penis with her right
hand and began pumping him. She moved her hand up and down while
watching him enjoying the experience. Now he was fully hard she
removed her underwear and stood up. She place one leg over him so she
was stood over his waist. The pair connected eyes as she slowly
lowered herself over his erection. Now she was on her knees and
placed her hand on his penis. She guided it into her moistened vagina
and slowly lowered herself onto it. Once she was all the way down she
placed her hands on his chest feeling his chest hair.
She then moved herself up and down on
top him and watched him at last feel some pleasure. She increased the
momentum moaning more and more as she rode him. As she went down she
felt the bum hitting his balls so she forced herself down harder and
harder.
Chris could feel pleasure but also the
pain from his balls being bashed. Knowing she was hurting him only
enhanced the fun for Nikki. She steadily increased the speed of her
thrusting as she came closer to climax. Nikki gripped his body with
her hands and let out even louder moans of pleasure. Despite the
damage to his balls he remained hard the whole time and was clearly
liking this as well.
Chris lifted his hands up and ran them
from her knees to her hips. Once he had his hands on her bum he
helped her slam her body down onto his testicles even harder.
Although this was not as painful as being kicked with his help she
was putting him in a fair amount of pain. She loved the very thought
of what he was doing. He was helping her to hurt him even more.
A few minutes later she tilted her head
back and bit down on her lips and she climaxed. At this point she
slowed the up and down movements them stopped completely. She was
amazed by how much fun that was. Looking down at him she could feel
his hard penis inside her.
“That was great Chris. I liked how
you helped me apply more force to your balls. I hope they still
hurt.”
“They do hurt. That was amazing. I
felt so close to you. I hope you don't mind me saying that”
Still on top of his she looked down “I
don’t mind you saying that I felt close to you as well. I don't
want you to cum as you are being punished but maybe later I will let
you”
“Only if you think I deserve it. I'll
do whatever you say”
Nikki put her underwear back on and
Chris got up and began to get dressed.
“I had fun with you Chris.
Ballbusting really is fun. But we have to get back to work and get
that report finished”
Chris struggled to get up so Nikki
helped him and once the pair were dressed they left the punishment
room.
At 12:30 Nikki and Chris went down to
meet Rachel at Reception. Chris was walking with a little discomfort
but Nikki slowed down for him. The pair then looked around and saw
Rachel, they waved and she walked over.
Rachel walked up to them wearing a big
pair of sun glasses and with her hair flowing down. She said “Ok
then where are we going guys?
Chris replied “I'll take you to De
Ponts if you like”
Rachel said “Wow that would be great
that is a very nice please to eat. That is very kind of you Chris”
“Its ok Rachel I want to show my
gratitude and its a shame you don't often get thanked for doing your
job so I want to do some thing nice. Nikki you also helped by hurting
my testicles yourself and by coming in when you did so the punishment
was extended. You both did really well and I want to tank you”
Nikki said “Your welcome Chris and I
am sure Rachel thinks the same way” Rachel nodded.
Nikki then said “We can all take my
car”
The group then got in the car and drove
to the restaurant. Once there they got a good table in the corner and
ordered food.
“This is a nice place Chris. Thanks
again” said Nikki
“It's ok. You girls deserve it”
Rachel then enquired “How are your
testicles feeling Chris?”
“They are pretty sore and swollen.
They ache a bit but I should heal in a few days maybe a week. I hope
you don’t mind me asking Rachel but do you work out and train for
ball kicking?”
“I don’t mind you asking Chris. To
answer your question yes I do, I train at the gym and have been
working hard to increase the force of my kicks. I want my kicks to be
as destructive as possible and I think we all agree testicle damage
is very important. So I want to be able to cause as much damage as I
can. I think it is better for both parties”
Nikki said surprised “I had no idea
you trained but then again your thigh muscles are well developed. So
you think harder kicks are better for both parties?”
Rachel sipped her drink and put it back
down “Yes. When a man is being punished then the more damage he
takes to the testicles then the more pain he feels. This means he
will be more effected by the punishment and more likely to learn from
it. Also if there is a person he has upset to get himself punished
they will be happy he has suffered a more severe punishment. Both
people benefit to the point a man should be thankful to receive the
extra damage. Like you are Chris”
Chris nodded and Nikki responded “I
see now. You really are professional about this Rachel which is nice
to see. Now I see why you are so thankful Chris”
“That's right Nikki I am grateful and
Rachel is also friend of mine. I appreciate the effort she put into
my punishment. I could really feel the difference in force Rachel,
you kicked me so much harder than last time. I dread to think what 80
kicks would do to me or even 100.”
After he said that the waiter brought
their food and the group ate continuing there talk on the destruction
of testicles.
Once they had finished they decided to
drive strait back to the office. They walked up to the front desk to
pay and Chris pulled you his wallet to pay. The girl behind the
counter told them the total but when Chris swiped his card the
machine says it was declined.
“What there must be something wrong.
I'll try it again” said Chris but again it came up as declined.
Nikki shrugged her shoulders “I left
my wallet at the office”
“So did I” said Rachel.
The young girl at the desk said “Errrr.
I'll just have to get my manager if you cant pay”
Chris shook his head “I'll have to
call the bank when I get back to the office I should have plenty of
money in there”
The girl came back with her manager.
She was about 25 and wearing a short black skirt and a smart dark
blue shirt with the top few buttons open showing her ample cleavage.
She had short black hair that was cut in a very smart style.
The manager turned to Chris and said “I
understand your card was declined”
Chris replied “Yes I am not sure what
happened could I call he bank and come pay tomorrow?”
“I am sorry sir that will not do our
stores policy states if you cant pay then you must suffer a forfeit.
I am sorry to tell you this in front of your friends but the forfeit
is a very painful form of testicle torture. I will require you to
come with me so we can start the punishment right away”
Nikki added “He has already had a
pretty hard ballbusting today is there anything we can do”
The manager said “I am sorry but
there is no negotiating. It is a shame he has already taken testicle
damage because this punishment is both slow and damaging. It is rare
for a testicle to be ruptured so you may survive it intact. You two
girls can come with me and see the punishment if you like”
Chris sighed “If those are the rules
then I must obey them. I'll follow you and you can do what ever you
need to do to my testicles”
Rachel said “I have to go but you go
along Nikki and support Chris”
Nikki said “Ok Rachel see you back at
the office”
Rachel walked out of the restaurant
while Nikki, Chris and the manager went into a back room. The manager
escorted them though a staff only door and down a long corridor. Then
she pulled out a key and unlocked a door right at the end. She opened
the door, stepping inside and turned on a light.
Nikki and Chris walked in and looked
around. The walls and floor were all concrete. The room was not meant
to look friendly. In the middle of the room was a wooden chair that
looked like it had seen some use. There were straps on the two front
legs so as to attach a victims ankles to chair when he was seated.
The seat was a single thick peace of wood that was totally flat and
behind the back rest there was some straps for the wrists.
The manager turned to them and in a
slightly nicer voice said “Before we start can I ask you to take
off all your clothes please. Then I will explain the punishment to
you both. By the way you can call me Sarah”
“I am Chris and this is Nikki” He
said as he began to undress.
Nikki left a little uncomfortable and
was worried about Chris and his balls. She hoped he would be ok.
While he undressed Sarah went over to a table in the corner and
picked up a peace of wood cut in a circle and some string. She then
walked over to see Chris standing naked and looked at his testicles.
She commented “They look pretty
swollen so there is a good chance they might rupture during the
punishment but I am afraid we cant avoid it. I hope you understand
Chris”
Chris looked a little troubled and
still did not really know what this torture was going to be then said
“I know I must face this punishment and you should not worry about
preserving my testicles. The most important thing is I suffer the
full punishment for today's mistake. Whatever you have planned I will
accept”
Sarah responded “That's good to hear.
For your punishment I will first tie this string around your
testicles then I have then circular bit of wood. The circle is 30cm
across and a small hole in the middle. When you are on your knees I
can use a shutter to make the hole large enough to fit your testicles
though then close it, kind of like a humbler does. You are then tied
to the chair and most of your body weight will then be supported by
your testicles. They will be crushed between the circular wood and
the chair. Your sentence is to be in the chair for two whole hours”
Chris nodded in acceptance. “I
understand Sarah and accept my punishment. Two hours of intense
crushing will be very painful”
Nikki stepped in “You mentioned this
could rupture his testicles. Do you really think that could happen?”
Sarah said calmly “Yes there is a
real chance of it and hopefully they do rupture it will serve as a
warning to other people. Plus if you don't mind me saying I do enjoy
popping a man's balls”
Nikki now even more worried “If one
does rupture can we get him to the hospital and maybe save it?”
“I highly doubt it. In this
punishment if one testicle fails then all the weight goes onto the
last one. One testicle cant take double weight for long and will pop
very quickly. Then the weight of Chris will squeeze all the innards
out of the testicles until he is resting on the flatten outer wall of
his testicles. He will still have to finish the two hours” said
Sarah
Nikki responded “Ok I understand”
Sarah said “Ok let get started Chris
go and get down on your knees next to the chair”
Chris obeyed the command and knelt
down. Sarah then came behind him and pushed on his back so he fell
forward. Now he was on all fours and Sarah grabbed his testicles then
wrapped the string around them. Then see pushed the testicles though
the gap in the middle of the circular wooden object and closed the
gap. There was still a little opening for the cords of the testicles
but not much more. Now the board was attached to him and Nikki saw
his two testicles in the middle. The skin was pulled tight over them
and she was concerned for him.
Sarah waved for Nikki to walk over.
Then both girls knelt down to inspect his testicles. Chris remained
silent as Sarah held his ball between her forefingers and thumb. She
squeezed them lightly and said “You were right these two balls are
swollen. It looks like he has been busted already today. I can feel
they are a little softer than normal. Now Nikki when we put him on
the chair the weight of his body all goes onto the circle of wood
then onto the testicles. They are then pressed between the circle and
the chair. It is a simple yet effective punishment”
Nikki nodded “Now I understand how
all this works it is actually quite clever. Very painful and also
very damaging to the testicles. I have read long term crushing is a
great way to damage the very center of the testicles and cause them
to bleed internally. Which you have every right to cause a man in
this situation”
“That's right Nikki. We think it is
important to cause significant damage to the testicles for issues
like this. That way the man learns. Although I am still hoping that
the testicles will rupture during the crushing”
Sarah placed the palm of her hand flat
on the testicles and pushed down to show Nikki what will happen to
them. She then said “You see how the testicles bulge out when
crushed. That will be a lot worse when he is on the chair. Over time
the balls will weaken and eventually fail. You see the sides of the
testicles, that is where they will hopefully split open. The maximum
sentence is two hours in the chair and that is what Chris will feel”
Nikki Nodded and Chris said “I
understand”
Sarah said “Nikki can you help me get
him on the chair?”
First Sarah placed two long bits of
wood on the seat with string tied to them. This was so his testicles
would not be crushed right away. Sarah grabbed one arm and Nikki got
the other one then they placed his in the seat. Chris was scared,
very scared but just breathed deeply. Sarah then tied his ankles to
the legs and then his hands behind his back. She then tied a a bit of
rope around his waist like the bottom bit of a seat belt.
Sarah explained “that bit of rope is
so he cant lift his body to high. He needs to be able to lift his
body a little but not too much. Also the longer the weight of his
body is on his testicles the more chance they will rupture”
“That makes sense” said Nikki who
was worried about Sarah's obsession with testicle rupture. Nikki knew
he had to be punished but thought castrating him was unfair.
Sarah then said “Ok Nikki I'll stand
at this side and you at the other then on the count of three we both
pull the string attached to the wood. Then his punishment will begin”
Chris stared strait forward and braised
for pain. He could feel the bottom of his testicles touching the seat
below and feared what would happen next. He really did not want to
loose his balls but part of him knew he needed to be punished.
With the two girls ready to pull the
wood out Sarah said to Chris. “OK Chris are you ready to begin?”
“Yes Sarah I am ready to be punished”
“Good now when we pull out the wood
your weight will suddenly drop on to your testicles. This will be
very painful from the start. Men in the past have recommended saving
your energy and allowing short pushes from the legs to lift up your
body. This will ease the pain and give your balls a moment to
recover. This punishment is very painful but is mainly designed to
cause massive testicular damage so saving your energy might save your
balls”
“Thank you Sarah. I will remember
what you said. Also thank you for choosing the longest punishment
allowed. I am grateful for that and deserve to suffer this torture”
“Its nice to hear that Chris. Now
Nikki ready? One! Two! Three! PULL!”
The two girls pulled the wood out at
the same time and Chris instantly dropped down. All of his body
weight went onto his testicles flattening them out. His eyes opened
wide and he screamed “ARRRRRRRRR!” until he was out of air. He
felt such intense pain it almost paralysed him. He squirmed on the
chair but that only moved the weight between his balls.
The girls stepped back and watched
quietly as he suffered. After a few minutes Chris found it was best
to stay still balancing the weight equally between his balls. This
was difficult to do but he tried anyway. His head rested down and he
made short sharp breaths while trying to stay still. He was in so
much pain and just wanted to scream but had to remain still.
He then pushed down with his feet and
found it was very difficult to lift himself up but managed it. He
stayed up for about 25 seconds then he had to let himself down. Each
time he did this it was like the chair was teasing him. Allowing him
to remove the crushing weight knowing he could only do so briefly.
Then the crushing resumed.
Over time the pain in his testicles got
worse, a lot worse. The pain turned into stabbing then tearing pain
as he testicles weakened. All he could do was grind his teeth as his
balls slowly deteriorated.
Mean while Rachel had arrived back at
the office. She had arranged to meet with Claire Schofield to discuss
Simon's punishment. As she got into the lift and started going up Lee
got in on the third floor. As soon as the lift started Rachel hit the
stop button on the elevator and looked at him.
“So then how are your balls feeling?”
He was noticeably nervous and said
“There still sore but ok. The swelling has gone down a bit”
“That's good to hear. Now stand
against the wall I would like to knee you for a while”
“Of course Rachel. Would you like me
to remove my shorts?”
“Yes please”
Lee the removed this shorts and Rachel
saw the swelling had gone down. She thought they would be far more
damaged than this. But then she realised that was a problem easily
fixed. He stood against the wall of the elevator and spread his legs.
He gripped the hand rail tight knowing it would be hard to stay on
his feet. Rachel put her hands on his shoulders and looked down. She
positioned herself in the right spot so when lifted her knee struck
his testicles.
She lifted her head and looked her
frightened victim in the eyes “Ok now stay still. I am going to be
hard from the start so get ready”
“Yes Rachel” He said
She pulled back her right leg but kept
her knee bent. She then pushed down on his shoulders and thrust her
knee forward as hard as she could.
WHACK!
As her knee impacted his already
swollen balls they compressed them against his body before they shot
to the sides.
Lee flung his head banging it against
the wall and screamed out “ARRRRRRRRRRRR!” His eyes were open
wide showing nothing but panic and pain.
WHACK!
Again his testicles were trapped and
squeezed. This delivered very intense pain to her victim.
WHACK!
With her short skirt on her bare knee
struck him again. She could feel her knee hit his soft sack then go
up into his body. She could feel the two testicles being trapped and
then them compressing. She felt how they flattened as they were
squeezed. Then she saw how much pain he was feeling and it made her
want more.
WHACK!
As if his testicles were waiting for
her she struck them again and compressed them. She bit her bottom lip
then smiled as she hurt the young man.
WHACK!
After another brutal knee she saw his
legs shacking and tears in his eyes. She was really hurting him.
WHACK!
“OUUUUUU! …. O GOD IT HURTS..... SO
MUCH” he yelled out as he struggled to stay standing.
Rachel looked at him. “O' is it
painful? Tell me how your testicles feel”
“OK. I feel tearing...... Tearing
pain.. Like splitting. Please …...”
“You feel tearing? That's a good
thing. It means your testicles are very badly damaged and bleeding
inside. Men normally feel this when a testicle is close to failing. A
few more knees and there is a real risk of one rupturing”
The young man was breathing rapidly and
was shocked by what he had heard.
Rachel smiled at him “I am sorry I
did not hear you. Would you like me to continue?”
“Please Don't.......”
Rachel responded “Ok then if you like
I'll stop. After a few more knees”
His momentarily look or relief turned
to shear horror.
WHACK!
“AAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR”
WHACK!
She felt him testicles squishing again
but they were a bit softer and had swollen up again. She had broken
his spirit and his balls would be soon after.
WHACK!
“ARRRRRRRRR!!” He screamed. Rachel
stepped back and let him fall to the floor. He lay on the floor
curled up crying out. His eyes were forced closed and when he opened
them he saw her heels. He looked up her legs and saw her standing
over him.
Rachel admired her work and said “I
did not feel a ball popping are they both still intact?”
He was breathing heavily still be said
“I don't know they still …. really hurt. Still like stabbing pain
in them... Why?...”
“I don't know why I just wanted to
hurt you. I hope you are ok with that?” she said.
“That's … That's fine. Its ok..
Just wondered is all. I think I can stand”
“Good now get your shorts on I am
sure you have work to do. But first show me your testicles”
He stood up with is legs apart and
looked away as she handled them.
“They look intact. Severely damaged
but intact.”
She moved them side to side inspecting
them.
“Actually they would look better with
some needles in them. In fact that is a great idea. I'll give you 3
weeks to heal up then come and see me. I will fill your testicles
with needles to see if they do look better. But I am sure they will”
“Ok Rachel. I will come back to you
for the needles”
Rachel un paused the elevator and Lee
put his shorts back on with plenty of discomfort. A few seconds later
they were on his floor and the doors opened. He hobbled out and down
the corridor. Rachel just watched and grinned to herself.
She did not know why she did that. He
did not need it and she could have ruptured him. She just felt the
urge and went along with it. She shrugged her shoulders as the doors
closed and thought “That was fun”
Meanwhile Chris had just pushed down
with his feet to raise himself up. He took deep breaths as his
testicles went back to close to there normal shape.
Nikki said “Only another 41 minutes
left. Good luck”
Sarah watched him and said “He is
doing well but there is time yet”
Nikki just nodded.
Sarah then said to Chris “What do you
feel in your testicles?”
He struggled to talk “Just pain
stabbing ….. Pain. Like splitting...”
She smiled a little which almost seemed
out of charterer for her “That's a good sign it means that they are
close to splitting. With any luck your testicles will rupture soon
Chris”
Chris managed a nod then could hold
himself up no more. He allowed himself to rest on his testicles once
again and his punishment continued.
Back in the office Rachel was sat down
with Claire. The two were discussing Simon's punishment.
Claire said “You did a very good job
Rachel. Simon was in the office earlier today and I felt his
testicles. They were so heavily swollen and bruised you must have put
him though hell. He told me it was very painful for him and you were
amazing. Despite the pain he sound like he respects you. I am sure if
you gave his balls much more they would have ruptured”
Rachel smiled “Thank you Claire I am
glad you are happy. I damaged them as much as I could but stopped
short of rupturing them. He is a good guy and deserved what he got
but rupturing his balls was probably a bit much”
“You are right Rachel but again well
done. Speaking of testicular rupture I really hope the board of
directors allows it soon. I think it would be great for discipline if
the men of the company knew that was a possibility. Funnily enough
Simon and I discussed testicle rupture as a punishment and he agreed
it would be a good thing. He is currently helping me re work the
employment contracts so the male staff agree we can purposefully
destroy one or both testicles”
“That's very nice of him I knew he
was a good guy. I actually enjoyed hurting his balls and would love
to do it again to him”
Claire's eyes opened wider and she said
“Well you can. When he was here we both decided he should suffer a
second session as harsh as the first one. So you get your wish”
Rachel pleased by this news said
“Sounds good I look forward to it but better give him some time to
heal or he will need to sign that contract now”
The pair laughed at what Rachel just
said. Then Claire started to type on your computer “I'll just send
you an email Rachel. One of the directors has a special request for
you. She wants you to punish a man's penis. She did not give me the
details but said you should contact a Dr Michelle Foster at the city
hospital to get a device she has. I am sorry I don’t know more than
that but you should be able to figure it out”
“Ummmmmmm. Sounds interesting I'll
check it out Claire. But I had better get going”
Back at the restaurant Sarah was
eagerly watching Chris feeling his balls being crushed. Chris had a
look of both despair and pain on his face. He feared that his
testicles might pop at any moment. Nikki stood with her hand over her
mouth hoping he would be ok. He only had a few minutes left.
Sarah said “It could happen any
second now. His balls could pop at any moment. He is too tired to
lift himself up any more so they should rupture”
Nikki nodded. While she was a bit upset
with what was happening she respected the torture device. She liked
the idea of it and wanted to give it a try. She just thought this
punishment was a bit too much for what Chris did.
Chris could feel the most intense
splitting pain in his balls. It was shear agony but he just had to
hold on a bit longer. Between the wood and the chair his testicles
were crushed to less than one centimetre. They were taking all the
weight of his body and there was nothing he could do to stop that.
He screamed out in pain thinking his
testicles were splitting. Sarah so hoped they were.
The last few minutes ticked by and the
two hours was up. Sarah looked a bit disappointed but picked up two
wooden wedges. She jammed them between the seat and the wood to lift
us his body. It took a few second for his testicles to expand. She
Looked under and said “They look like they are intact'
Nikki breathed a sigh of relief as
Sarah untied him. He fell forward onto the floor with the wood circle
still attached. Nikki looked and saw his testicles. They were very
swollen and the skin was all purple. Sarah removed the wood and
string then he fell on his side and clutched his testicles.
“They we huge, but intact” he
thought as he inspected them.
Sarah said “Now your punishment is
complete you should get dressed. I have other things to do so see
yourself out” She sounded disappointed that his balls did not pop
but the two were ok with that. Sarah walked out of the room leaving
them.
Chris lay on his back with his legs
wide apart to accommodate his massively swollen testicles. Nikki
gently stroked them.
“I am glad your testicles survived
the punishment Chris. Your a nice guy and did not deserve to be
castrated over a small bill!”
He raised his head a little “Thank
you. Thank you for being here with me”
“You're welcome. But how do your
testicles feel?”
“They both have deep tearing pain
down to the center. They are very badly damaged. They might not....
Ouch! Fully heal. The bleeding inside is causing the swelling. I
deserved it though. I am glad they did not rupture them but she was
right to punish me”
“That is good of you to say. One
other thing is I texted Claire Schofield and explained this to her.
She said you can have the rest of the week off to recover”
“Thank you for doing that. Can you
help me up”
“Sure Chris. Lets get you dressed
then I will drive you home”
END.
Another great story section that was worth the wait. I was really excited to see this story posted and I really enjoyed reading it. Never a dull or vanilla moment in your exciting writing. I hope you continue to write because I would really hate to stop reading such beautiful sadism.
ReplyDeleteThanks again for another 5 star story!!!!
Thank you. I keep trying diffeent things and was wondering how part 10 would go down with the reader. Thanks for commenting.
DeleteWOW!!! PART 10 IS THE BEST YET!! I AM IN AWE OF YOUR BALLBUSTING LITERARY PROWESS!
ReplyDeleteI honestly find myself at a serious loss for words in describing how absolutely amazing part 10 was and how much I LOVED EVERYTHING you managed to write. You really seemed to incorporate everything I am into, even outside the realm of ballbusting. Male orgasm denial, cowgirl sex with a girl's butt used to ballbust a guy. I did not really know butt busting (I looked it up) was a thing until my jaw dropped when I read part 10. I really got the impression that you tried to incorporate everyone's suggestions and interests from your previous story section, especially mine. It appears that most of us who are commenting share the same interests because I wanted to see everything that was requested as well. I really can not begin to articulate how much I appreciate your hard work and thoughtfulness in accommodating everyone. PART 10 WAS NOTHING SHORT OF SPECTACULAR!!
I know that this is redundant given how many times I have stated it when commenting on all of your amazing captions but as far this story section is concerned I FOUND EVERYTHING YOU DID AMAZING! I will try to highlight some of the ultra highlight worthy aspects to part 10 but it is a story section that if it were a section in one of my textbooks I would highlight every word. It would look like a yellow piece of paper with black letters printed on it.
I struggle to articulate with specificity in a manageable and brief manner just what I loved the most in part 10 but it all boils down to DETAIL. You really broke down (pun very much intended) more than the character, Lee's, spirit with your detailed explanation of the ballbusting but you TRULY CAPTIVATED MY ATTENTION by capturing the detailed experiences of the girls and guys (Chris and Lee). I can not emphasize and impress upon you enough how much I love reading a bust by bust and moment by moment explanation of what all of the girls and guys are feeling and thinking during the ballbusting. It really makes the action much more intense psychologically when you provide detailed explanations of where (which testicle) a kick or knee lands, what the strike sounds like, how it makes Rachel or Nikki (or any girl feel), and how it makes the victim feel and think. It could be just me but I am very inquisitive by nature and to me there is no such thing as too much detail, especially when it comes to ballbusting and your stories. I particularly love to hear details about how it makes the girls and guys feel emotionally and physiologically, especially the pain felt by the guys (always supremely curious about it). The sound of Rachel's heels as she approached Chris to kick his balls was GREATLY APPRECIATED.
With respect to actual content, it primarily relates to the level of the detail because I enjoy all manner of testicle torture and psychological torture (suspense and the spectrum of emotions). To highlight a story section composed of highlights I would say that I particularly loved the visual and tactile focus of Chris and Lee's testicles. I particularly love when the girls look at the guy's testicles and both perceive and verbally express the damage that they are causing. I love it when the girls feel the guy's balls and assess the damage they cause in between and after torture sessions. I would have liked to see even more of that but you did a great job as it is so I am hesitant to say that.
I love the narration of the thoughts going on inside the characters' heads and I love the sadism of the girls and the absolute submissive and selfless attitude of the guys in putting the girl's pleasure about their own self interest. In particular, I love how Chris really embraced his punishment and on many occasions asked for more (well deserved, LOL) punishment.
ReplyDeleteI ABSOLUTELY LOVE that you incorporated multiple girl ballbusting and observation. This was unique and made the ballbusting more public and really allowed some amazing girl to girl sadistic interaction possible. I really loved that Nikki started off more innocent but then really showed her sadistic and inquisitive side. I really like the contrast in the testicle crushing torture sequence between Nicole's absolute sadism and Nikki's more caring but still very sadistic side. I love the Nicole wanted to see Chris' testicles rupture but Nicole thought it was a little too cruel but still accepted that Nicole had a right to define the punishment (no matter how cruel).
I really enjoyed the ballbusting instruction and encouragement that Rachel provided Nikki and I enjoy how Nikki really showed her sadistic side. I love the focus on Rachel training her legs and technique to become the best ballbuster she can be. How inspiring and amazing is that? I love how Rachel describes her progression and training in the ballbusting arts.
I love the wide variety of ballbusting torture. I am really appreciating the kneeing more especially how you broke down the mechanics. The 3 minute squeezing by Nikki was GREAT post ball kicking. The detail and the description of the testicle crushing was GREAT as well.
I am glad you brought back several of the previous male characters (Lee and Simon) into this story section and set up details as to their upcoming punishments. I look forward to it. I am really curious about the penis torture that you reference and I definitely want to see some more needle torture.
THANKS AGAIN FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY SECTION. I CAN NOT GET ENOUGH!!!
Wow that was one hell of a comment. Thank you for taking the time. I was trying a few different things and did not know if they would be as popular as things I had done in the past I am pleased to hear you liked it. Definatly more to come!
DeleteYour welcome. I hope you enjoyed my feedback. I might have gotten a little carried away and wrote too much but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your story. Even I was surprised to see an even better story than you wrote in part 9. Thanks again.
DeleteEven though I typically comment on your stories on the femaledom forum I think I will just comment on your blog, since this is where people are decent enough to show their appreciation.
ReplyDeleteYou really did another amazing job worldwide and I also loved everything you wrote. Part 10 was my favorite story part as well. You definitely have nothing to worry about as far as the new things you were trying are concerned because you nailed it. I agree with Erica who said it way better than I can. I was really pleasantly surprised that see you feature a sex scene with butt busting, especially after some a hard ball busting punishment. I really love the combination of sex and ball busting. Even something as beautiful as a girl's ass can cause so much pain if used correctly.
Thank you very much for writing another amazing story and also for taking my feedback into consideration. I also can not get enough of your amazing story writing.
Thank you for letting me know. Knowing people like my work is what keeps me writing. You're right about femaledom. Not may people there comment or seem to care that much so I might even stop posting there.
DeleteAnother very exceptional story section worldwide!
ReplyDeleteAlthough I can not begin to match the obvious passion and enthusiasm of Erica I definitely do share her thoughts about your latest story section. I really think you did an excellent job with everything you wrote and I would not change anything. The elements of your story that I appreciated most are essentially your level of "detail" as Erica had expressed. You did an amazing job providing your fans with a greater insight into the girls' and the guys' thoughts during all of the ballbusting action. Whether the detail concerned the damage done by a kick or the girl's thoughts about the kick she delivered you provided enough detail to really captivate and interest me.
No one has really complimented you thus far on this but you also did a great job building suspense, particularly with the potential of testicular rupture during Lee's elevator kneeing and Chris' crushing torture. Similarly you did a great job with spatial changes in the plot and working multiple plot elements together. For example, during Chris' crushing torture punishment Rachel had returned back to the office to punish Lee and to meet with Claire. I like misdirections in plot that create multiple opportunities for other ballbusting action and plot development. I really enjoyed the random act of sadism where Rachel just felt like punishing Lee in the elevator so she just began viciously kneeing him. I loved the fact that he was still recovering from his last punishment and I love the kneeing in particular. I am a pretty big kneeing enthusiast and I really enjoyed the manner in which you described the kneeing, which was pretty detailed and brutal. Even most of the best ballbusting writers would not have done as good a job as you did with describing the kneeing involved in this story section.
I was curious as to why this story section featured another character named Nicole when you previously had a character named Nicole. It could potentially get confusing if this Nicole ever reappears in future stories. I think it would be ideal to use different names for your characters but please do not take this negatively.
I wanted to commend you on advancing your character development additionally by bringing back past male and female characters and also bringing in and developing a new female character, Nikki. I like Nikki and her growing appreciation for ballbusting. She is sadistic but just the right amount of sensitive like Rachel.
Most importantly I wanted to commend you on innovating and trying new things, which has really piqued my interest. I have found myself wondering what will worldwide write about next. Even if the unlikely event occurs that you write something I do not like I will appreciate that you tried to innovate and come up with something unique. I enjoy creative ballbusting tortures because even traditional ball kicking and kneeing can eventually become monotonous if you exclusively rely upon it. I do not want to hamper your creativity by asking you to write anything in particular. I seriously doubt you could write a bad story.
Finally I just wanted to thank you for once again putting so much time and effort into writing and sharing with us (your fans) another great ballbusting story. Your generosity and hard work is rare and definitely is not lost on me. You could spend your time doing a number of things. The fact that you took time out of your day to write and share with us a story, great, good, or bad, is something that deserves appreciation.
I will be glued onto your blog anxiously looking for your next story whenever it should appear because I really love your stories. I also love your captions but do not have an imagefap account to comment on them so I am one of your many lurkers.
Hi Alan,
DeleteThanks for that. I probably should not have named another Charter Nicole (not sure why I did that). I am very grateful that you have taken time to tell me what you think. I saw you wrote about matching the enthusiasm of Erica. This is not a competition I just like hearing that people have read the story and liked it. I often use feedback to shape a story I am writing so please share. Although I think we all enjoy Erica's enthusiasm for the sadistic.
Thank you again.
Everyone is correct about part 10 being your best work so far. I have enjoyed all of your stories as you clearly are the best ballbusting writer out there. I would rather read a story of yours or your captions then most ballbusting videos. I am no literature major or avid reader but I really appreciate your level of description that has increased since part 9. I love to read and see a restrained guy get his balls brutalized by a sexy and sadistic girl. I love everyone of your female characters and I loved the ballbusting cowgirl sex.
ReplyDeleteI really hope you never stop writing because I am hooked. You writing and captions have been so good that I could not help but stop lurking and thank you. You even managed to attract a girl over to this boys club!
Thank you for saying so. You are most welcome. I did try to increase the level of detail as that sounds like one thing everyone likes. I intend to keep it up and listen to what you guys have to say.
DeleteWelcome to the club! A seat has been reserved for you by the vice and your entertainment will be brought out shortly. While he is being restrained could I interest madam in a drink?
Your welcome. How thoughtful of you to reserve a front row seat for me.That would be great to sit right next to a restrained guy getting his balls brutalized. Great vantage point to see the kicks land or the vice crush the life out of his balls. With stories as exciting as yours it is hard to wait but I am sure part 11 will be entertaining for sure!
DeleteI am so glad that I was referred over to your blog because your stories and your captions really are amazing. I enjoyed reading Erica's "comment." Her enthusiasm represents the group sentiment as I see it. You really did an amazing job and I agree this was even better than part 9!
ReplyDeleteI also hope the board of directors approves 'intentional' testicular rupture as an approved punishment, which I hope to see again. I would love to be a fly on the wall at that board of directors meeting! I enjoyed that conversation with Claire and Rachel, who I am sure would make good ballbusting lobbyists. For some reason I really want to see more Claire. It might be the fact that my last supervisor was a woman named Claire and she had this really bitchy side but was sexy as hell.
Thanks again worldwide for another amazing story. I cannot wait for part 11.
I have a feeling that 'intentional' testicular rupture will get approved and I will bring Claire out a little more as I am sure she has potential. I was planning on having some ruptures in the future because I like writing about it. Most of you guys seem to like it. Also some of you like the suspense when a rupture is possible and like the uncertainty of not knowing. If one does not pop every now and again then that suspense will be lost (Kind of like a action show where the good guys always win).
DeleteThanks again.
All of these comments since part 9 really made me think that your story writing skills must be amazing. They definitely are and you have exceeded my expectations with this story.
ReplyDeleteYou had me at the BALL BUSTING COWGIRL SEX SCENE. That was fucking amazing. I think this crowd is probably a girl on top type crowd and as far as I'm concerned that is the best way to roll. I would have preferred it if she tied his hands and rode him reverse cowgirl for better access to his balls. Good position for some punching and squeezing and with his hands tied up he will not be able to grab her ass. Nothing is better than some ass grabbing while a girl rides your dick. Your idea was still great though.
I like the way you think worldwide. You are a devious guy. I cannot wait to read more.
Thank you and there is more on the way. "reverse cowgirl for better access to his balls" you say? I think we could fit that in at some point.
DeleteAnother great story worldwide. I really do not have much to add that has not already been said. Part 10 is the best in my opinion followed by part 9 and the difference maker for me is your greater detail in the ball busting. Oh yeah I think it is good that all of the recent guys have endured their punishments without the balls getting ruptured. I prefer the close calls but I suppose a few eggs have to be broken to have that suspense effect.
ReplyDeleteYou are my favorite ball busting story writer. I also on the edge...of my seat to read your next story.
Thank you and as you said "I suppose a few eggs have to be broken to have that suspense effect" That is what I was thinking.
DeleteI have thoroughly enjoyed your writing style. Your approach to ballbusting is deeper, more thoughtful, and more sensual then most writers. I like how descriptive and creative you are. Thanks for sharing these stories.
ReplyDeleteI also wanted to say that I would like to see Simon's ex girlfriend make an appearance in a subsequent story to assist in one of his punishments. I really enjoyed the multiple girl ball busting element in this story and I liked that Simon was trained by his ex girlfriend.
DeleteJust my two cents for the future.
I'll keep that in mind. Thanks.
DeleteI guess I will join the comment party. Someone's becoming more popular as time goes on. What can I say that hasn't already been said? You really did a great job with this story for all of the reasons everyone else has mentioned. Your stories keep getting better, except part 8, but even part 8 is better then anything I have read for a while.
ReplyDeleteYou are the best bb writer I am aware of and I am aware of many. Undisputed best bb writer active now for sure! Great to see you address everyone's comments and Erica and Alan's manifesto (their comments are as long as your story!). I can't blame the enthusiasm because you are amazing and us weirdos and weirdetts need to stick together.
In the nature of requests/suggestions I second:
1)Creative non cutting bb torture
2)More 2 girl on guy bb
3)More Nikki
4)More bb cowgirl sex (or female dominant sex like facesitting)
5)More inner girl sadism thoughts
6)Bringing back a rupture or two
7)More random/mildly justified bb (ex- Rachel vs Lee in elevator)
8)More needle torture
*If dick torture appears please no cutting and please no exclusive penis torture as a substitute for ballbusting. Extra punishment to the dick may be cool but if that it the focus then it is not my thing.
I definitely agree with the spirit of your solidarity remark, however the term "weirdos/weirdette"is offensive to me. From where I sit the idea of 'normal' is an illusion and it is represents a two dimensional frame of mind in a three dimensional world. Besides, it is not our fault that the rest of the world does not have our cultured and refined taste. I refuse to adopt a marginalized mindset and so I have discarded the world "weird" from my vocabulary. We should all embrace who we are. As long as we treat each other with respect and don't harm anyone who cares what stuff we like.
DeleteOh yeah and the list looks good to me.
Thanks for commenting. I have read the list and I am sure stuff i do in the future will be happy. As for the elevator BB seen I did not know you guys would like it so much so I reckon I'll have to do a bit more of that.
DeleteIt is great seeing the number of fans and the level of participation increase so dramatically since part 9. This is another amazing story. I agree that it is even an improvement from part 9, which was my favorite. I would just be repeating the same thing as everyone else if I listed everything that I enjoyed because everything you did was great.
ReplyDeleteStarting off the new year with one of the best if not the best stories yet. I agree with everyone compliments above. I also really enjoyed the character Simon's submissiveness and have a curiosity about his ex girlfriend. Rachel's attitude was really entertaining and the torture was creative, especially the full weight standing.
Thank you for generously sharing your writing talent with us.